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My Front Porch
Contributed by
Kandice-n-Justin
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Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:05:48 AM in AEST
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My Front Porch, a place i call home.
Everything around it is beautiful.
The flowers in the front yard,
And the old wooden swing that sits to the left.
The world around it sounds like a jungle,
Rather than a backroad through a forest.
I listen to the water drip from the trees,
and the birds singing as they pass by.
As i sit here and listen, everything else goes away.
No problem could distract me from the peace and beauty of this forgotten place.
I sit here and cherish every sound, spot, and memory,
As i escape from the reality.
Somedays the thunder rolls back in the trees.
Others the sun shines through the windows bright.
But everything stays in place,
Just makes everything alright.
When i have nothing to do,
And the big brick house isnt good enough,
I walk down the hallway and to the left
To my front porch, a place i call home.
Copyright ©
Kandice-n-Justin
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2007-06-06 10:05:48]
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Re: My Front Porch
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:40:31 AM AEST
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Oh the gentle caress of nature from the point of view like a front porch. How amazing, how soothing to the soul. Your work here is excellent. And welcome to YPDC! How wonderfully poetic your imagery stands! A debut that leaves me wanting more. I am in fact envious of this. I have longed to capture words to explain the outdoors from right outside of a home. Nothing is more pleasant or makes the world go away such!
WONDERFUL!
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Re: My Front Porch
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by brew on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 12:42:18 PM AEST
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What a thought. Breezes...happiness, and freedom......yes....beautiful write........I love a house that brings home. I wwant a homeplace as....said. What agreat write.
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Re: My Front Porch
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 02:58:11 PM AEST
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Thanks for taking us along with you to sit on the front porch it is so soothing to read this. Lovely write here
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Re: My Front Porch
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by books_4gal on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 02:59:58 AM AEST
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| What I've always wanted is a front porch to sit on, we had a back patio. Currently I have a front porch in a busy neighborhood, and I enjoy the thunderstorms we've been having from its safety. Thanks for your very evocitive words. |
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