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Words
Contributed by
Cannabiskilla
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Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:33:41 PM in AEST
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Words
jumbled ,
a tumbled Jenga of unorthodox, linguistic paradoxes.
A small poxes of small flocks of unfinished thoughts outside the boxes,
crumbs of undone wisdom, and vision
for some young dumb victims of ignorance.
The cerebrum becomes one as the mental incision of verbs, nouns and adjectives,
has begun to mend with the rhythm of the instrumental avalanche of
fundamental intelligence.
The mental drum ceases to succumb to the circumstantial evidence of impermanence,
which is consciousness.
So much to say in such little time,
Minds unwind under rhythm and rhyme,
finding a kind of silence among the vibrations of
ambiance. Awaiting the librations of renaissance.
Civilizations,
Condemnation,
Retaliation,
Liberation,
Which bind to form the stitch in time.
Revolution,
Constitution,
Retribution,
Evolution,
The mystery of history in its absolution.
Vindictiveness, resolution
Forgiveness, absolution.
Breathe, release
Freedom, peace.
Halleluiah!
Communication!
Obscurity transformed into revelation.
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Cannabiskilla
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2007-06-06 16:33:41]
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Re: Words
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:55:09 PM AEST
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That was awesomely orchestrated peace of work you have written here. Thank you for sharing it with us. May your heart always be filed with peace and joy each and everyday.
sadaddy
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Re: Words
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by Tot on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 09:53:43 AM AEST
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| And it is a poet's poem , I should think~ I really enjoyed reading it, being new as I am I hope to be able to read much more~Tot |
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Re: Words
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by shelby on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 01:41:35 PM AEST
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now this is some cool stuff here!! I like
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Re: Words
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 8th June 2007 @ 02:38:02 AM AEST
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Right on! Very cool write. I loved how this rolled out. Exceptional. I'd love to hear you recite it. We must get together for a smoke, listen to the Dead and recite poetry, my deadhead friend. *wink*
Much peace and big hippie hugs,
Laura |
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Re: Words
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by DeeMeister on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:12:59 PM AEST
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| Impressive write! A pleasure to read. |
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