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famous last work.
Contributed by
dinosauruscharlee
on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 04:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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to all of those who matter
and all of the ones who care
things wont change much
i just wont be there
we've had out times
and most of them bad
but the important thing to remember
are the pleasent ones we have.
who cares if i die
my memory will live on
you'll all think of me
when you listen to that song
weekends are for the warriors
but fridays are for friends
thats what we were supposed to be
good thing this is the end
-you know who you are and you know what youve done
-your a silly little girl thinking he is the one.
-hes gunna do like the others and you'll get bored.
-you know everyone may be right calling you a whore.
you kiss me you hug me you made my world bright
we've gotten so far the thought fills me with fright.
the start of a new life you made such a change
the thought of me leaving just feels so strange.
=who thought we'd make up and be so close
=when im gone i think i'll miss you the most
=i hope you'll remember me when i was at my best
=you treated me better than all of the rest.
so this is my goodbye
my so long, my farewell.
im tired of this feeling useless crap
theres nothing more to tell.
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dinosauruscharlee
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2007-06-06 16:51:30]
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Re: famous last work.
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 05:08:25 PM AEST
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The feeling of despair and sadness are felt in your write; the ending left me hanging for a little more. May your heart once again feel the peace and joy that you seek deep within your heart.
Sadaddy
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Re: famous last work.
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by madhusudan on
Wednesday, 6th June 2007 @ 10:32:16 PM AEST
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| Goin through somethin similar this poem seems so apt...its really movin and hurts ... |
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Re: famous last work.
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 01:43:54 AM AEST
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Deep and full of sadness and despair. This was written good and you expressed yourself, thoughts and emotions very well. Well done.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: famous last work.
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by shelby on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 04:47:09 AM AEST
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A great deal of sadness you painted here for the reader. Good job with such a display of heartfelt emotions
Michelle |
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Re: famous last work.
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by Thespia on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 08:58:56 AM AEST
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| I love the begining, middle and end! Such an emotional poem. Amazingly expressed. |
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