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Pins And Needles
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 09:15:42 AM in AEST
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Im sitting here on pins and needles
Waiting for your sign
Sitting here on pins and needles
Im bleeding for you but its fine
Run a hang through your disheveled hair
And tap your finger impatiently
I see you sitting there
And I hear you groan faintly
Listen to my song
You know you cant go wrong
I like it when you sing along
Find the place that you belong
Im sitting here on pins and needles
Fighting off the feelings
Sitting here on pins and needles
Passionately you I am craving
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2007-06-07 09:15:42]
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Re: Pins And Needles
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dimes on
Thursday, 7th June 2007 @ 09:30:37 AM AEST
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Hmm. It's not bad, but not good, either. A little plain. This song didn't have any heart, any meaning, any passion when I read it. To be truthful, it seemed a like a jumble of words that one would hear in a sad song, but they didn't really fit together.
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