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broken
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
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sleep has come to me at last
it leaves only to fade into the past
the dying sun has yet to set
but my eyes are already at rest
calm, like the ignorance of a newborn,
only to wake into chaos.
the ambience slowly fills my mind
i miss all i left behind
a setting sun shines dull rays into my eyes
and i breathe in the air to release a sigh
theres a sense of being weak even after all that sleep
theres a sense of still being tired
so i lie down...
and close my eyes....to escape this world
that makes me unhappy
in a world that craves perfection.
I am broken.
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fallensilence
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2003-02-28 07:00:00]
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Re: broken
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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beautiful - i can totally relate to the need for escapism and being tired of everything. love the language and simple but effective imagery. great write, keep them coming, Kate x
re: 'don't read this' << excellent reverse psychology, lol |
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Re: broken
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 28th February 2003 @ 03:40:14 PM AEST
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Geez, you sound like I've been sounding lately... love the poem. :)
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