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DESTINY
Contributed by
miss_aude
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Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 08:44:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I WOKE UP THIS MORNING,
LYING NEXT TO A STRANGER.
HE WAS SO BEAUTIFUL,
I THOUGHT I WASN'T IN DANGER.
I STROKED HIS HAIR,
CARESSED HIS FACE.
THEN I SCOOTED IN A BIT CLOSER,
SO IN BETWEEN US, THERE WAS NO SPACE.
SO PEACEFUL WAS MY SOUL,
RIGHT AT THAT MOMENT.
I KNEW HE WAS AN ANGEL,
MY VERY OWN HEAVEN-SENT.
BUT ANGELS DON'T BELONG WITH ME,
A DEMON, AN UGLY COLD BEING.
WHIP ME BLOODY FOR TRYING,
BREAK MY BODY, STRIP MY EYES FOR SEEING.
CUT MY UGLY SKIN,
DRAIN ALL MY POISON AWAY.
FORGIVE ME FOR ALL I'VE DONE,
I DO NOT DESERVE TO STAY.
SO I PLUNGE BACK TO HELL,
SO DARK AND DRY.
THIS IS WHERE I ETERNALLY BELONG,
MY DESTINY IS LONELINESS TO SHATTER AND CRY.
Copyright ©
miss_aude
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2007-06-09 08:44:43]
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Re: DESTINY
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 09:18:21 AM AEST
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everyone is deserving of love. even the battered and beaten 'demons' of Earth. you are only not worthy when you determine your self unworthy, and when you have given up. this is definitely amazing poetry, dark and full of emotion...i love the sweet beginning, and how it became a dark and scary thing to read. you are a beautiful writer, and you can be loved for that.
-Bethani- |
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Re: DESTINY
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by InfinitePoet on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 05:15:25 PM AEST
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| All I can say is Helll Yeah!! Excellent Write!! The darker the better!This is the way i let my darkness out into the light too! Keep Writing Always@ Peppermint Ki$$e$ |
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Re: DESTINY
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by JRLatin77 on
Tuesday, 8th June 2010 @ 07:03:19 AM AEST
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What Da!
I'm sorry but the character in this piece might just need to reach deep down inside them selves and perform some type of exorcism to get rid of those negative feelings. What ever is making them feel this way needs to faced head-on, with the aim of recognizing it, grabbing it, and dumping it into the trash, so it can stay in the past. Never push away moments of happiness when it starts to embrace you. Every thought and action one makes in their life is applied to their destiny, meaning you have the power to create your own Destiny.
Although this piece threw me for a loop, I still consider it art. So Thanks for sharing it, and take care. |
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Re: DESTINY
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by Paddy on
Thursday, 29th July 2010 @ 12:58:43 PM AEST
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| you deserve love, every1 does. I found your poem sad but well written |
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