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Be
Contributed by
MVJSimon
on
Saturday, 9th June 2007 @ 03:01:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Boy, girl
Black, white
Strong, weak
Pretty, ugly
Unemployed, self
Happy, lucky
Married, single
Whatever be
Hindu, muslim
Rich, poor
High, low
Human, we
Gone, well
Fight, must we
Think, Exist
Simply, Be.
Copyright ©
MVJSimon
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2007-06-09 15:01:05]
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Re: Be
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 09:26:14 AM AEST
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i love this.
the word choice, and most of all the rhythm it has to it. it was a nice read, almost fun to read in a way.
beautiful.
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Re: Be
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 05:10:55 PM AEST
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Amen
Nice write
Nuff said :-)
Whisper |
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Re: Be
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by Thespia on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 12:01:29 AM AEST
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Short
Strong
Simple
Perfect!
Thanks for sharing |
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