|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Cooling
Contributed by
crow
on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 07:46:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
Remember a night
soft thoughts were ours
talks of far-away places
if onlys" rise.
That minute We were swift and sure
a fire" made the desert look small
Heat shimmers rise
joining tinseled sounds
of leaves giving to wind.
I am yours completely
at this breath, and always
I have your word I will carry
through time.
Memory rides
a nameless wind
The desert takes nothing..
but what We leave behind..
Here We will lie"
secrets or claim
We were lost between dreams...
and the cooling...a breath..and a need... Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-06-10 07:46:39]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 07:52:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| An excellent write.. |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:11:12 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great work vin.
I'm sure it's very much appreciated.
Big huggs, smiles,
emy |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:27:49 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow, this left a bit of mystery and wonder to me when I read it. You two sound like you have a great bond of friendship. As always, I love the brevity of the words and the intenseness of what they say.
Beautiful.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by coolkid7098 on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 01:47:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very nicely writen |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 06:26:46 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| very well written |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 08:02:22 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This poem is like a gentle night breeze, soft and calming but also exciting and mysterious. You have captured this all.
A lovely write from your heart,
Take care,
Dom |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 11:08:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow... a Masterpiece! Beautiful words and a depth that touches the heart. This poem came from the heart... ~~ Oceandreamer~~ |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 04:29:03 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Oh my GOd!!!
I have this huge surge of excitement come through me...... You captured everything right here. I almost have tears....... Thanks for this
love you
huge hugs
~Michelle~ |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 10:55:39 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Vincent, this was a very sweet, soft and beautiful caress ..
like a cool breeze on warm skin. I love the atmosphere you
created with your words and the gentle way they flow ....
Dreamy, airy and soooo completely rapturous.
Exceptional work, my friend. As lovely as the midnight sky,
adorned with the silver glow of stars ~
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: Cooling
(User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 08:29:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| ahh sweet |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
