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Maybe someday there'll be a place for us
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:29:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You can close your eyes to what is real pretending that you do not see. You can numb your feelings make believe that theres nothing there. Youre bound to live a lie. Youre running with wolves, free and wild wearing your mask, to hide whats inside. You can run from love, close the doors on your heart, but you cannot hide... from the truth that lives inside. When you resist your destiny it can be a long drawn road, forever knowing that theres a part of you, youve left behind. Running wouldnt stop the pain, or stop the currents of your heart . forever drawing me in. My love shines on you forever, even when were apart. Maybe someday somehow, therell be a place for us.
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Re: Maybe someday there'll be a place for us
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by AirHead on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:59:10 AM AEST
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| Beautiful..........how i feel towards someone right now |
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Re: Maybe someday there'll be a place for us
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by emystar on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 09:00:19 AM AEST
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You never really know.
Awesome writing.
As long as we have breathe in the body then there's hope.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Maybe someday there'll be a place for us
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by Dom on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 05:13:45 PM AEST
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Very easily relatable, many people, myself included will have been through this.
I like the idea that this poem is like one continuous train of thought, so passionate and all-encompassing that it has flowed out of your mind onto the page.
Lovely write,
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Re: Maybe someday there'll be a place for us
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 03:49:15 AM AEST
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This poem was easy to relate to and it held a lot truth..Well done and expressed..
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Maybe someday there'll be a place for us
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by richcol7522 on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 11:35:34 PM AEST
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I can very easily relate to what you have written here..you did a very good job with this piece...Thank you for sharing
Rich |
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