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Sometimes
Contributed by
honey56
on
Monday, 11th June 2007 @ 06:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sometimes I see your smiling
Face..
Briefly in my sleep,
You faded into the shadows
I sometime feel your presence
Near.
.
I try to hold on but you quietly
Slipped away..
I heard your voice call me Carol
It said to me..
I awaken crying out for you,
Answering
Your distant call..
Your voice grew silent to my
Desperate call..
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honey56
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2007-06-11 06:31:11]
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Re: Sometimes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 06:44:03 AM AEST
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| Honey this just takes you right to the edge and drops you off! EXCELLENT.. and I think a great read and write. Vincent |
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