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Echo
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 06:23:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I write of you..
wayward wind
the soul in thought
the heart that is mine
on a nameless Sea.
Dress for the rain
cast words away
I am lonely
I am hurt
I am in love today..
momentary rumble
down deep inside
remember to dance"
or dreams fade away.
I call to you
great expanse
mere echos
bound for the heart
and I dream..and I dance...Vincent
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2007-06-12 06:23:06]
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Re: Echo
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 06:48:38 AM AEST
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I just cannot pic the favorite cause it is all my favorite I just love this my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: Echo
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 07:47:05 AM AEST
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Boy Howdy! Did I ever pick the right day for readin' poetry! Did everyone here get better or do I just have a greater appreciation today. I don't know, but when I figure it out, I'LL BOTTLE IT!!!
This was masterful in its simplicity & beauty.
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Echo
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th June 2007 @ 02:05:21 PM AEST
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Beautiful words, vincent, from a beautiful soul.
Your writes are always so soft and gentle, like a
tender breeze that caresses warm skin. And so
FULL of beautiful imagery.
Lovely, my friend.
~Breezy |
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Re: Echo
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 12:16:37 AM AEST
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You know I love the entire write. "Fictional" huh? Sounds so very real to me. The last stanza....I'm dancing too. Beautiful read from a beautiful person.
Much peace,
Laura |
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Re: Echo
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by needledancing on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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| Just beautiful. I read this and every thought of worry and woe left my brain. It was a soft wind that whispered by and said quiet now all is well. A comfort piece for sure. |
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