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Love is
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 06:55:14 AM in AEST
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Through the eyes of love, a place where beauty lives... its unconditional, it knows no end Its warmth, embraces from afar. No oceans too deep, no skies to high no wall can keep us apart. If this love isnt perfect, then what is love? If this love isnt right, I dont want to know right from wrong. If this loves a crime, Im guilty as sin. If we are not high on love, why are we touching the ceiling? If this isnt real, I choose not to wake from this dream. If this love isnt life, then what are we living for? If this isnt happiness of tomorrow, I choose to stay in this moment with you. If this love brings sadness and tears, leave me to drown in this ocean of love. If this isnt everything, Id rather have nothing nothing at all.
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Re: Love is
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 07:00:25 AM AEST
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Bravo!!!!!!!
sounds like someone has been bitten by a love bug and ohhhhhhh how beautiful it is.
A lovely write
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Re: Love is
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:09:25 AM AEST
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A wonderful proclamation of love and deeply poetic. I echo your sentiments there is no greater death of the individual than to drown in the ocean of a love.
EXCELLENT!
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Re: Love is
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:11:09 AM AEST
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WOW! Wonderfully spoken, dreamer!! This has a gorgeous flow
of beauty that captures the heart and lulls it fast into a rapture of
love. And oh! Your sentiments are so warm and perfect. Exactly
how love is and should be!
Loverly. Just loverly!
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Re: Love is
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 11:26:38 AM AEST
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wow such passion and beautiful wording.. this is very powerful and moving very enchanting write
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Re: Love is
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 12:13:07 PM AEST
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love can so thrilling
good flow.... |
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Re: Love is
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by bluestars on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 03:52:43 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem u chose all the right words to explain all of ur emotion one that we can all relate to, keep on writing and thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: Love is
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 10:09:48 AM AEST
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you are such a romantic
love your love flows..... |
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