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Can I Have Directions To Civility And Life?
Contributed by
Channing
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Wednesday, 13th June 2007 @ 08:43:04 AM in AEST
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Stranded in a forest,
Trees one way and
Trees another way,
Which direction do I go?
Do I follow the sounds of animals
Or the gust of the wind?
Maybe I should just close my eyes
And walk in a random direction,
To wherever my feet decide,
I could sit and wait for a guide
Yell for one possibly,
But they rarely come,
So what am I suppose to do?
Where do I go?
What action should I take?
For I’m stranded,
Lost to civilization,
Completely alone in this forest of life
-Channing-
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Channing
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2007-06-13 08:43:04]
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Re: Can I Have Directions To Civility And Life?
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by Arannon on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 06:57:25 AM AEST
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| I like the imagery of winds and guides. There is, however, some ambiguity in word choice: civility vs. civilization; being alone vs. being in a forest full of life...? |
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Re: Can I Have Directions To Civility And Life?
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 10:23:55 AM AEST
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| i love the images you created here. miss talking to you. - courtney |
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Re: Can I Have Directions To Civility And Life?
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by MorguesMatter on
Tuesday, 27th October 2009 @ 01:25:44 PM AEST
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| your lines where profound sincerely, so sad brought a smile to my heart for I have been there and only recently have began in a direction which seems promising-Morgues |
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