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Spellbound
Contributed by
fadingaway
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Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
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Let me tell you tale's of love,
So I may weave a spell to leave you intwined,
All across the expanse of an emrold sea,
A ship has sailed to bring you to me,
The unyealding desire for lust and love,
Was said to arive on the wings of a dove,
Let me leave a web intact,
A simple thought spun deep inside,
Running into body and mind,
Look into my eye's and see,
The truth of my words deep within me,
The seed of my soul, as a matter of fact,
Blending new with old,
Mixing hot with cold,
I desperatly desire,
To be you inner fire,
To bond with a host,
And not be a ghost,
I sing to your soul of pretty things,
And all the wonders,
That true love brings,
While you lead left,
I'll slip right,
Until the noose about your necks pulled tight,
By then it's all over,
It's to late to fight,
I drew you in,
And wove you tight,
Danced and enchanted,
My spell through the night,
Let me tell you tales of love,
So I may weave a spell,
Across the sea on a ship of dispair,
Empty promises to make you think I care,
A seed planted deep inside,
So one day it will grow,
And a part of me will begin to show!
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2007-06-14 17:00:00]
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Re: Spellbound
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 14th June 2007 @ 10:38:31 PM AEST
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Nicely done
Danced and enchanted,
My spell through the night
i just love those two lines.
great job
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Re: Spellbound
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by shelby on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 06:00:22 AM AEST
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and this poem leaves those reading it spellbound, awesome job with this
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Re: Spellbound
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 06:08:00 AM AEST
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What a spell woven! And yes sometimes love is like a prey to a host. It's not really unfortunate (well yes it is) but it's rather rewarding sometime that you can love and allow someone to take from you. For it is a way to learn about who you are and who you are in love. Being on the other side well I have never felt as if I were. I imagine however that being the prey is well a way of seeking love and not being able to truely comprehend it. Thus making the prey-host love on both sides sometimes necessary in finding out how to love and how to be.
This was an amazing job!
BRAVO!
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