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We Met Love . . . Ben
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 12:47:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We met love
when we were young
amidst an evening breeze,
your kiss you left upon my tounge
oh how you loved to
tease.
Sauntering
in your lingerie
my pulse began to race,
no need to ask if i could play
'twas written on your
face.
Never did i come so close
with anyone before,
Burning with desire we kept coming back
for
more.
This was more
than just a fling or any one night stand,
trading in our friendship rings for a wedding
band.
We met love
so long ago yet not so long at all,
for even now i love you so for you again i'd
fall.
I'd walk that road of loneliness
that brought my heart to you,
knowing when i reached the end i'd meet
my dream come
true.
Yes we met love and nurtured it
to what it is today,
upon a pedestal you sit
and there you'll always
stay.
Closer to the angels
than any one could be,
the night that we met love
we also met
eternity.
Ben
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Re: We Met Love . . . Ben
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 02:44:11 AM AEST
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Your love is unconditional and so rich, it's almost too much to take in... But who cannot succumb to such a beautiful melody? I have missed your words, dear friend... I have missed you. There is always such warmth and... a sense of completeness after reading your work. You write with an angel's pen, cheri, and your ink is love of the purest kind. I can never thank you enough for being who you are, and most of all, for being such a wonderful friend. Forgive me for the lengthy absences, I am not ignoring you. Life, as we both know, gets us tangled and perilously occupied with things that we'd rather forget. But, c'est la vie, no? Massive amounts of joy and love going your way, papa bear. You put a big smile on my face, =D. Thank you for you. Always,
Your little flower,
~Stephy. |
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Re: We Met Love . . . Ben
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 05:04:31 AM AEST
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I'm so happy to hear the tortured roar of the beast has once again changed to the contented purrrrrrrrrrrrrrr of a Lion in Love*wink*
BigLoveMuchPeace
~misfitme |
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Re: We Met Love . . . Ben
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by 5MinutePoet on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 06:51:41 AM AEST
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| I like the story, and i enjoyed what you tried here with your sentance structure. However, saying this i don't think it worked for you this time. For me, the struggle you had to end every stanza with one word detracted from the purity and poise. It seemed to distract you from the goal and often became random and confused. But keep trying and i'm sure it'll work out |
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Re: We Met Love . . . Ben
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 06:27:54 PM AEST
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Absolutely the most wonderful testament of your love. Die hard and true, it is, Ben. You are so very lucky...and I know little old me, doesn't need to tell you that. Thank you once again for sharing this perfect gem of a marriage. I love you both...Peace brother
Your hippie sis,
Laura (who is all teary eyed at this read) |
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Re: We Met Love . . . Ben
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 07:15:05 PM AEST
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sooo beautiful, i knew the two of you loved each other so deeply, but since you were both young, like im thinking teenagers? amazing! you share something so rare and wonderful indeed!! beautiful gentle write:)
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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