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Rising Son
Contributed by
daniella
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Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 11:59:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Rising Son
Drop the anchor down now Shes as out to sea as she can get Steady as she goes noooow It may be sad to remember But it helps nothing to forget
Forgive the rain for falling too hard And the sky will not alter its state Forgive him for dooming your boys It will never wipe clean the slate I cant misdirect the bullets If I cant find who fired the gun Those who depend on the pulling of the tides Blame his rising son
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2007-06-15 11:59:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rising Son
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on
Friday, 15th June 2007 @ 04:42:39 PM AEST (User
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This is fantastically written and what an ending two lines, this is such talent you have.
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