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Can't Forget To Remember
Contributed by
ashleigh
on
Saturday, 16th June 2007 @ 04:59:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Im not that stupid little girl you might think I am,
But Im walking in chains along with the damned
I cant stand, take my hand, oh thats right, you just cant
Because Im first to show you life isnt all planned
Dragged along the rocky ride
Im noticing for the first time
How much I dream of being alive
Decide
I cant find a place, Im losing my face
Im seeing that faith is not meant to take place
Of the logic and hardness required to pull through
Im missing you
Dragged along the rocky ride
Im noticing the second time
How much I need to stay alive
To find
Vicious is an understatement in this case
I need a pinch of a clue and a handful of grace
I cant take this, my shame is taking over me
You were through and I cant even see
Dragged along the rocky ride
Im wondering if theres still time
To look into your deep brown eyes
And find
Theres a void full of noise in that vast space of me
So annoyed, overjoyed to be rid of me
Take my life to the sea tie me up watch me breathe
In my doom
Dragged along the rocky ride
Im not taking this one more time
Im getting loose, throw me a line
Goodbye
Overshot it, little bit, forgive me
I had to get my point across so you might believe
Im allowed to be loud and voice my hate for you
Its the truth
Dragged along the rocky ride
You close your mouth and shut your eyes
Youre asking me if Im alive
Id love to answer, but Im out of time
Is your guilt now setting in
Too bad, youll have to live with it
Dont worry, soon I know youll quit
Next week will be a different skit
Copyright ©
ashleigh
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2007-06-16 04:59:54]
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Re: Can't Forget To Remember
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 12:04:06 AM AEST
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I think this would make a great song, what with the aggression, the rhythm and the rhyme.
Very emotionally intense, I liked the repetition in this.
Take care,
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