|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Free
Contributed by
NoSaint
on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 10:54:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
Cocoon lay shattered
On forest floor
Pieces of yesterday
Nothing more
Butterfly resting
On tall tree leaf
Recovering
Filled with relief
Off to the moon
Butterfly swoops
No limits now
No backward loops
Flitting amongst stars
Butterfly shines bright
As she flies into
The endless night
Ever forward
Butterfly dreams
No restraints
Nothing as it seems
Butterfly resting
On leaf of tree
Happy just to let
Her spirit run free
Copyright ©
NoSaint
... [
2007-06-17 22:54:16]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th June 2007 @ 11:04:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow Shari. This is beautiful. I adore the metamorphosis of the
caterpillar/butterfly and you've created a feeling of being light
and free wafting through my soul.
How wonderful!
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 12:22:45 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| oooh! aren`t we creative today! very nice work, and a pleasure to read..Vincent |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 12:43:59 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I see you found your poem lol.....
I love this nicely done my friend
Michelle |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 05:12:43 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
exquisite and beautiful as the butterfly within, so gently written,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by doug on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 06:58:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Different than most of the poetry
I read on here. That's okay though
because I love different. It keeps
things fresh and interesting as does
this poem. Nice work. Very light and
makes one smile. Truly , Doug |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 07:40:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well done. I haven't seen your work in some time. It is good to see you have not skipped a beat. Quite a wonderful job as always. I loved your pleasant words on the butterfly, something with beauty I feel many of us take for granted.
BRAVO!
SCM |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 11:06:50 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| wow beautiful writing |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 01:14:31 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful write Shari. I simply love butterflies. Your title of "Free" was so fitting here. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
|
|
Re: Free
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Monday, 18th June 2007 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| butterflys are so beautiful just like your poem I love it xxxx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
