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Bizarre
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 09:59:43 AM in AEST
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Crossed connections
Missed directions
Who do you think you are?
Territory claiming
Character maiming
You fell from what star?
Think before you react
Are you on the right track?
Or are you off by far?
Stomping around
Acting the clown
Maybe leaving a scar
Causing trouble
Leaving rubble
You are acting bizarre
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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Re: Bizarre
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:04:17 AM AEST
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thanks for this Shari.... yea can you believe that crap??
I loved the poem...... Im not putting up with little girl games that is indeed forsure.....
will talks latters
love you
Michelle |
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Re: Bizarre
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:05:17 AM AEST
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| yes, childish and small" doesn`t it make you butt" tired....good write my friend. Vincent |
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Re: Bizarre
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by StephaniePaige on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 10:17:33 AM AEST
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| oo this one I really liked, it caught my attention as soon as I started reading it. |
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Re: Bizarre
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 11:13:57 AM AEST
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loved it ass soon as i saw the title,
brilliant!! |
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Re: Bizarre
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 11:22:46 AM AEST
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I think we know the same clowns
well done |
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Re: Bizarre
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 12:53:20 PM AEST
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holy cow
what i miss ?lol
Both you and michelle seem upset anbout someone.You did great on this write.
take care
hugs |
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Re: Bizarre
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 02:40:09 PM AEST
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Ouch! wow, Shari .. powerful write. It takes all kinds, eh?
Sorry that you've been troubled with this sorta thing .. (hard to put
up with, even harder to ignore, right? I know. I know.)
Great that poets have an outlet for that sorta thing ...
~Breezy |
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Re: Bizarre
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by Dom on
Tuesday, 19th June 2007 @ 05:53:07 PM AEST
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I've got to agree with Breezy, at least you can give as good as you get!
Nice, snappy and to the point, I loved it!
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Bizarre
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 12:53:57 PM AEST
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Penned very well, Shari. Stinging in it's brevity and to the point. Well done.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Bizarre
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by GlenDavid on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 01:28:15 AM AEST
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This is a great read! very true, the actions of others (and myself sometimes!) are very bizarre!
Unfortunately there are one too many game players in the world...
Thanks your comment btw! ;)
Glen.
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