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Maurice
Contributed by
Thespia
on
Wednesday, 20th June 2007 @ 11:15:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A friendly smile A warm embrace A kindly heart A pleasant face All those things I used to treasure Plus a heart to big to measure A strong grip A gentlemans arm A joker of jokes A lovers charm The most gentle person I ever knew How I regret not saying I love you
A clich I know but life is short Let harsh words and frowns be a last resort Fate is always bitter sweet Try to be kind to all those you meet Make the best of the hand your dealt Every gesture meaningful and heartfelt Live for today! Be everyones best friend. For our future is uncertain, and is sometimes quick to end.
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2007-06-20 23:15:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Maurice
(User Rating: 1 ) by inlovewithaladd on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 09:48:11 AM AEST (User
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typically, i hate rhyme, but this doesn't feel forced at all. good flow, and the human element really rings true. a beautiful piece. |
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Re: Maurice
(User Rating: 1 ) by inlovewithaladd on
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typically, i hate rhyme, but this doesn't feel forced at all. good flow, and the human element really rings true. a beautiful piece. |
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