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Desire
Contributed by
deathbringer
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Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 08:02:12 AM in AEST
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Long time since I last looked upon one's soul
Long time since I last looked throughout this world
So little time since my last fault
And so often I have crawled.
Destroyed by remorse , destroyed by pain
And so many mistakes and so little to gain
From this long dead world called living
The time has come for a new beginning.
My life has passed , I want to be forgotten
And my souless corpse needs to be rotten.
I want to leave this world , to rest in pieces ,
I need to find my rest in emptiness and darkness.
I crave to be forgotten and to forget all those
Who killed me , who were the cause
For all my pain and suffering
From the past , when I was still living.
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2007-06-23 08:02:12]
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Re: Desire
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 01:22:48 AM AEST
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Very unique idea! Your words choiced were excellent. The flow was good and I especially love the transition from memory to current desire. A great all around piece of poetry. Good job!
BRAVO!
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