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Laura's Lullabye
Contributed by
needledancing
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Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 09:39:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When the world is full of clouds that fill your eyes with tears
Remember all the goodness you've given through the years
There is no better way to find the essence of a soul
To travel down the road of pain, arriving home so whole.
We know the beauty lying in the heart that harbours there.
We want the words of all our love to guide you on with care.
We'll cry with you and spend the sleepless, wondering night,
We'll share" our stay strong stories", until everything's alright.
I know you have the strength and wisdom how divine you are.
You've given us the inner heart, you brilliant shinning star.
You've stood by many in their hour of written pain and fear.
We'll call in all our angels till all is past and clear.
We are here for you Laura.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-06-23 09:39:48]
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by shelby on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 09:49:08 AM AEST
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Lovely write smooth and flowing with a pretty message for someone will love Yes we are with her indeed.
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by NoSaint on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 10:00:48 AM AEST
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wonderful
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by MisfitMe on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 10:21:04 AM AEST
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| ABSOLUTELY!!! |
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 10:46:28 AM AEST
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My friend it is such a reassuring and comforting poem; the words not only lullaby's Laura to sleep peacefully but those whoever is going through a stressful time shall sleep peacefully.
Great write.
FRANCO.
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by Crow on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 01:01:51 PM AEST
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| this is one of two" very touching writes blessing my screen tonight, excellent thoughts sent out. .Vincent |
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 01:16:51 PM AEST
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What a beautiful offering of friendship and support. tottaly awesome as always ND.
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 02:39:54 PM AEST
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| This is a very touching poem. i also thought the picture was very appropriate for this poem. Well Done! |
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 06:55:05 PM AEST
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Another great write for our Laura.
We are here for you sis we got your back,
so you will always have our support.
hugs sisters |
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by Dom on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 08:02:55 PM AEST
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Beautiful words of strength and inspiration, ND, I'm sure Laura will take comfort in this.
Take care,
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 01:17:23 AM AEST
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Simply excellent ND! Quite a beautiful choice of words and a masterful flow to boot! Laura will completely love this poem. All of our thoughts go out to her. And indeed she does have friends here. Your message was beautiful and I know it will touch her as it did your readers. Another brilliant write. I loved, absolutely loved the opening stanza those may be the words of the day in my estimation.
BRAVO!
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Re: Laura's Lullabye
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 09:27:27 AM AEST
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ND .. what a loving and sweet tribute to our dear friend
and hippie sis, Laura.
I am so lucky and proud to be among the poets of YPDC.
A family that we've chosen for our own ~
Beautiful words, my friend. There is much inspiration here ...
~Breezy
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