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These Famous Last Words
Contributed by
foreverjaded
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Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 01:29:51 PM in AEST
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All my life Ive been weak,
So when death comes,
I wont turn the other cheek,
Ill stand strong and face its wrath,
And take each breath as my last,
I wont run in fear,
When the end is near,
Ill say my goodbyes,
And let my spirit rise,
I wont wallow in self pity,
Or think of the things I didnt get to see,
Ill take the last train,
And think of the day well meet again
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Re: These Famous Last Words
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by Tot on
Saturday, 23rd June 2007 @ 09:57:20 PM AEST
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| Though this poem was short, it had a lot to say~ Facing death is all we can do~ I loved it~Tot |
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Re: These Famous Last Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 01:06:28 AM AEST
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Whoa! This is brilliantly powerful. It had me pondering of how much strength is in looking fear in the face and saying "Okay go ahead". WOW! I came into this write not knowing what to expect so expecting little. Looking and the shortness of lines and overall poem I began expecting very little. But, damn was I wrong. I enjoyed this immensely and even must admit am a little inspired.
As Tot said this was short but damn did it ever say so much. I love this sentiment and the ending was just WOW! Excellent work, be proud!
SUPERB!
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Re: These Famous Last Words
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 06:57:16 AM AEST
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| i thought this was good,often thought about death and reuniting with lost ones |
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