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Lost
Contributed by
Thespia
on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 11:17:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lost to a space
so dense, dark and dim.
An eternal black void,
to loose myself in.
My heart, a black stone,
a heavy burden to bare.
I keep it locked inside,
empty, free of care.
No thoughts of love or hate.
No feeling, taste or smell.
No life left inside these bones.
I am a hollow shell.
Copyright ©
Thespia
... [
2007-06-24 11:17:38]
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Re: Lost
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 11:33:50 AM AEST
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| So expressive and melanchonic. You have managed to express the negative feelings that linger after an arguement in such a clear way that I'm impressed. Keep writing!! :) |
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Re: Lost
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by Chamaron on
Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 03:58:39 PM AEST
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| No one would imagine missing emotion until they've felt the numbness... excellent poem! |
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