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Obsession
Contributed by
Kross
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Sunday, 24th June 2007 @ 06:58:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Drawn into the abyss, Being ones own antagonist
Shriveled into this land created by bliss.
Inner callings taking control,as voices wisp
Viens buldge deeply, as blood pours like vast
keeping self sustained scratches that etched
into portrayed glass
Breathing uncontrollably, to seek out a fable created path
To lead in a circle that brought only outrageous wrath
Widened eyes to strain blood shot visions into precision
Being dwelled in a spiral of ones made incision
Calling out loud battle cries from all the demise
Digging deeper, as brain scattered to reprise
Which reaped the soul, down a spiral of lies
Annihilation seeks forward, to destruct inner life
Pulling from this empty shell which brought forth
down a isle to hell
Screaming now from the inside, ones word won't escape
subsiding in a hollowed shadow, trapped down into this reminisce...
One who dwells....
In self created bliss.......
Copyright ©
Kross
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2007-06-24 18:58:42]
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Re: Obsession
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 06:54:56 AM AEST
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That is really really good hun .
You discribe in details so well.THis may well be your best yet.Anyways great job.
Love mom |
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Re: Obsession
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 04:06:22 PM AEST
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chilling and darkly write
Michelle |
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Re: Obsession
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Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 05:06:50 PM AEST
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Hey old friend, welcome back ;)
I do have to say you have completely and totally captured the eeriness of how an obsessive person can come across to others. You've impressed me again ;)
Love ya,
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Re: Obsession
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 05:07:26 PM AEST
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Hey old friend, welcome back ;)
I do have to say you have completely and totally captured the eeriness of how an obsessive person can come across to others. You've impressed me again ;)
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Obsession
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 05:29:25 AM AEST
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Justin,
Fabulous write, dark and very creative with words. (didn't realize until now, Karen had a son that wrote poetry) Your mother is an excellent writer and you seem to have quite a bit of writing talent yourself.
Well penned.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Obsession
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 04:57:12 AM AEST
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Whoa this is some deep stuff
Good write justin |
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