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My Love Song
Contributed by
Todd
on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 06:32:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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The window to your heart
is just a picture show
the curtain has fallen
not so long ago
When we first began
your love seemed so true
these days you are bitter
known only to a few
You make me sad
when you want me to bleed
yes this you should know
this I do see
It is never enough
all that I do
you only see faults
and show everyone too
You are not the first
to take this path
I can clearely see
the comming wrath
You just sit there
your silence is heard
I feel your secrets
no need for words
I am not found
in your chambers inside
I wish you love
so I'll kiss you goodbye
Copyright ©
Todd
... [
2007-06-25 18:32:58]
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Re: My Love Song
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 07:04:14 PM AEST
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Todd,
a poetic write of pain and love, flowing and beautiful but so damn sad. I hope your days are filled with happiness.......
Michelle |
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Re: My Love Song
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by Bruce on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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| I agree with Michelle and I wish you good luck in your future. |
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Re: My Love Song
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by Bruce on
Monday, 25th June 2007 @ 07:55:25 PM AEST
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| I agree with Michelle and I wish you good luck in your future. |
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