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i plant this seed in you
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 04:07:03 AM in AEST
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wandering song on fallen leaf fawns
spring of ideas like a newly planted seed
even through corruption this growth takes hold
branding ideas like a searing thought
thrust like a sword of reason into the hearts of man
only to be forgotten and a scar to show
ideas can only happen with global thought
working to better life and then forgetting to destroy
planting seeds are easy I plant this one in you
nurture it and let your ideas grow
make time for change
take the noise out of your ears
and smile into someone's soul
by example we can all win
and we can all shine
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2007-06-26 04:07:03]
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Re: i plant this seed in you
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by brew on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 12:59:16 PM AEST
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WOW Regan.......Very inspirational, write.....Such elegance....I loved it.differ from some of your darkening writes.....and Glad to see you posting...I guess you heard about Rita? Let me know......
Brew~ |
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Re: i plant this seed in you
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 01:46:20 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, Relic. Beautiful thoughts and meaning to this piece.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: i plant this seed in you
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:26:59 PM AEST
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shine on
well done |
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Re: i plant this seed in you
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by jms957 on
Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 03:32:01 PM AEST
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This is very deep with lots of thought, however, there was no tenor to help image your vehicle in this poem. It needs more flow, although it was a quite nicely thought out poem. Good word usage, and creativity is all you can ask for. No one is wrong in poetry, so kudos to you my friend!
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Re: i plant this seed in you
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by jms957 on
Tuesday, 19th February 2013 @ 03:33:06 PM AEST
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