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i lost my lighter
Contributed by
spookz570
on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 11:31:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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set this city on fire
it's ok
everyone's used to being burnt alive
i've been burnt before
look at the scars
these aren't trophies
they're a reminder
a reminder of what i used to have
but the wind comes by
and blows them away
maybe into an eye
where a tear drops down her cheek
realizing she was the spark that started it all
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2007-06-26 11:31:13]
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Re: i lost my lighter
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:24:26 AM AEST
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this is a very creative interesting write.. I especially liked the end.. great job in expression here ..
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: i lost my lighter
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by vampyrekiss on
Wednesday, 24th October 2007 @ 12:15:08 PM AEST
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| AWESOME i like it haha the title drew me in and the poem was totaly different then what i expected but a great write none the less i love it really |
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