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Razor Aquatic (Toppling Walls)
Contributed by
skyhawk432
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Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 01:54:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dripping off the edge-sweet guillotine,
I played charades with hands
lying limp at the sides
and heard heads land in buckets
while friends guessed what thing
these dead fingers formed:
Some claimed a pike, others coral,
and the more imaginative: seaweed;
yet, all watched their drowned estimates
bubble without oxygen
until they choked on the water
from the still-eyed answer:
"Point."
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2007-06-26 13:54:26]
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Re: Razor Aquatic (Toppling Walls)
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by Harsh on
Monday, 12th July 2010 @ 12:09:47 AM AEST
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