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My Music
Contributed by
bruce
on
Tuesday, 26th June 2007 @ 07:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My Music
You are my music, my darling
what I hear each day
What gives me all my strength
and helps me find my way
You create a power within me
that I never had before
Is it any wonder, that it's you
I absolutely adore
I love you with my heart
and this love constantly grows
You are the flower of my dreams
my most beautiful rose
You are a heavenly delight
every inch of you, a constant desire
The mere touch of your hand
sets my heart on fire
A very special lady, in every way
I love you, for all that you are
I will give you all my love forever
whether I am near or far
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-06-26 19:14:05]
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Re: My Music
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by PoeticHybrid on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 04:36:53 PM AEST
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| A very sweet and well written poem. Nice work. |
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Re: My Music
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 06:29:52 PM AEST
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Very sweet, as always, you never fail to write poetry that is gorgeously romantic!
I particularly like the analogy in the first stanza.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: My Music
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 02:03:13 PM AEST
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| This is a very lovely poem that you have written. i really love the rhythm of this piece. Good job! |
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Re: My Music
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 10:16:24 AM AEST
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beautiful and sweet,
love n' hugs nessa
roses |
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Re: My Music
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:21:07 AM AEST
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the third stanza is a delight to read loved how you compared the two. The warmth that rises from this poem makes me smile
Michelle |
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Re: My Music
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by fuzzler on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2010 @ 03:34:24 PM AEST
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| Long live your love, how profound it must be.... it kind of makes me sad so i know its real. |
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