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what would you do if I?
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:26:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What would you do if I turned
and gave you away?
shut my ears
so I won't hear you speak?
Closed my eyes
so I couldn't see you standing there?
then would you
actually care?
Vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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2007-06-27 01:26:46]
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Re: what would you do if I?
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:34:10 PM AEST
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| this sounds one-sided, someone thinking of only themself. not taking heed, or advise you are giving. good write. Vincent |
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Re: what would you do if I?
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 11:46:55 AM AEST
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First off Jenn nice to see u writting again and i want to thank u 4 your comment here so in case this site goes balistic again my god i'm almost over the edge with this place lol. ok this poem is great i know just what your saying cause some times u have to walk away from some one to let them know u care. another treasured poem by you . . .
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Re: what would you do if I?
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:56:07 PM AEST
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Ahhhh this speaks volumes Jenni, in so few words. It was heart-wrenching to read. *hugs you tightly*
Peace,
Laura |
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