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Dancing in the Light
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 06:12:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Some dance with the devil
Then cry when their feet get burnt
Others hunger for revenge
Never realizing its them they hurt
Me, I choose to dance in the light
Some gossip and put down others
Superior is how it makes them feel
They need to check their own backyard
For the garbage there is all to real
Me, I choose to dance in the light
I am no better than any of the rest
I am a sinner, definitely No Saint
I try to live, as I believe
But a picture of perfection I aint
Me, I choose to dance in the light
I merely state what I have seen
So excuse me I judge not you
Each has to find their spot
And dance to their dance without cue
Me, I choose to dance in the light
If I dance in the light I glow
With an innermost radiance
And even in the darkest hour
In the light of my soul I will dance
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 07:53:17 AM AEST
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Right on, Shari...and you do dance in the light sweet sister, yes you do. Beautiful piece that filled me with inner peace and love.
Thank you for sharing this piece and for choosing "to dance in the light".
Peace and hugs,
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 09:32:22 AM AEST
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wow Shari you did great with this write.
Thank you for sharing your light.
Big hugs |
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:06:34 AM AEST
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yes yes yes
thanx for sharing your light |
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 10:28:18 AM AEST
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there is the sunshine again I liked the lightness to this write it danced
Michelle |
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 12:15:00 PM AEST
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well you really done good here, I like dance"in
and light!! good work my friend. Vincent
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by Dom on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 05:43:16 PM AEST
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This poem really touched me. I've been trying so hard recently to be like this; its easy to slip back into old ways, but it feels so much better to dance in the light!
Lovely poem,
Dom |
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by Baronhawk on
Thursday, 28th June 2007 @ 04:06:20 PM AEST
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| Choice and free will, perhaps some of God's greatest Gifts to us mortals. Though we must live within the bounds of fate we do choose our very own destinies. At least in our deeds for though God choose our endings we have been given the privilege not given to other of God's creation. We choose to live and to take action according to our choices. We are not bounded by our forms but we are free to become what we may be. You have chosen to dance in the light and that is perhaps sometimes, the most difficult of choices. To take responsibility for one's life and say Hey! I choose to be in the light, I choose to be the light regardless of whatever is around me. Or at least the protagonist in your poem does. It is a courageous choice to dance in the light. But I personally think that it is a fine one. A wonderful topic and a poetic expression that is rather skilled in its execution. |
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Re: Dancing in the Light
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by Thespia on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 11:45:56 PM AEST
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| How wonderful, emotional, deep and very strong. Gives us all a lot to think about, thank you for sharing |
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