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blackness around my world
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Wednesday, 27th June 2007 @ 01:02:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Someday I will be perfect
I will rise above the blackness that covers my world
I will mean everything to him
everyone and anyone will mean nothing
Emptiness is within
and all around
there is nothing else left of me to give
bleeding to feel so needed
I am the angel
your the real demon..
...trying to get in
to get through me...
you can't reach
I turn away
cursing your name
I will not let you give me the blame
Vampyress Jenni
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2007-06-27 13:02:34]
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Re: blackness around my world
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by Spike on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 11:25:25 PM AEST
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Man, don't we tie ourselves in knots - over our inner turmoil as much as other people! A lot of complex and familiar struggles in this one, Jenni.
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Re: blackness around my world
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:31:42 AM AEST
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| we always throw ourselves through hoops hoping that one day we'll mean enough. great poem, i love the flow and message in this piece! |
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Re: blackness around my world
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by wheels on
Sunday, 29th June 2008 @ 10:10:09 AM AEST
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A very good poem. Painful but with a stand. Still love the way your writing flows.
--kevin
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