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The River Of Love
Contributed by
lowman613
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Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Falling in the river of love,
finding true destiny,
in search of the one your sure of,
to spend all eternity,
diving in deeper to find the one,
the perfect mate,
soaking up the heated sun,
for true love is fate,
Wading in the waters so blue,
breathing in the fresh air,
for a romance so true,
knowing love is out there,
The river of love,is deep,
you have to know how to swim,
for a true love is worth the keep,
of her loving him!
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lowman613
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2003-03-01 11:30:00]
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Re: The River Of Love
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by exiled on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 11:38:03 AM AEST
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Lowman, this is so good. I really really like.
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Re: The River Of Love
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by olasunkanmi on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 12:45:48 PM AEST
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| this is good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Re: The River Of Love
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 04:30:16 PM AEST
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| how delicate, so fantastically written, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: The River Of Love
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 05:44:25 PM AEST
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really really good write
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Re: The River Of Love
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by shelby on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 10:31:21 PM AEST
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| You did a very good job on this poem. |
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Re: The River Of Love
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 11:46:09 PM AEST
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great write
loved the ending
let the river of love flow on
peace be your journey
terry |
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