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Family Ties
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 02:58:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Raven haired beauty,
Eyes full of sadness,
Lives in a world of greys...
Firery headed mother,
Eyes full of confusion,
Lives in a chaotic world...
Sandy haired father,
Eyes full of rage,
Lives in a world of turmoil...
All lay together,
For the first time in months,
Finally resting in peace...
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Re: Family Ties
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by a7x36 on
Saturday, 30th June 2007 @ 05:13:37 PM AEST
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sad...... but necessary
the end of this poem brings peace to the poem, like it seems the end of these lives brought peace to all of them |
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Re: Family Ties
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by needledancing on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 04:05:32 AM AEST
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| This could very well be speaking volumes...all at rest in peace. An interesting and well done throught stirring works. |
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