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One Last Time
Contributed by
moses
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Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 05:17:32 AM in AEST
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A cold nest rests with so much space but there is only one face perched beside it, glaring off into the distant blue.
Frail, her colors pale. Watches as a leaf brown and rigid falls to the frigid ground. And only she is there to hear its sound.
Stirring deep inside she feels a feeling no one could hide. With no warning and no goodbye she spreads her wings to fly one last time into the morning sky.
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Re: One Last Time
(User Rating: 1 ) by Poess on
Sunday, 1st July 2007 @ 01:46:38 PM AEST (User
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I like this. I like the feeling it gave me as I read it...I had a feeling of a ghost in the woods alone...
Good read.
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