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Surrender
Contributed by
nachi1981
on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 03:52:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I close my eyes every night,
Hoping for my angels sight
The vision of my hearts eyes,
Is a lady, demure and shy.
I rub my eyes in disbelief,
Staring at loves motif
Is it just a painful mirage?
Desire and despairs mlange.
I reach out with my palm,
Her slender fingers stay calm
She holds my hand oh so gently,
Drawing it near her intently.
I feel her heart, beating fast,
Sounds of a love so vast
Sweet scent of a blossoming rose,
Her slender body does propose.
I caress the softness of her arms,
Oh, loves most powerful charms
To this mighty goddess I surrender,
My womans love in all its splendor.
Copyright ©
nachi1981
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2007-07-02 03:52:41]
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Re: Surrender
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by needledancing on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 04:01:20 AM AEST
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| Excellent write. One can only surrender to love as one must...so be it. |
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Re: Surrender
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by Xbxg32000 on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 07:09:13 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written, I enjoyed the structure of the lines and the overall flow of this poem. Awesome! Keep it up :]. |
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Re: Surrender
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 08:07:12 AM AEST
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This is good stuff
well done.
I like it..... |
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Re: Surrender
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by Poess on
Monday, 2nd July 2007 @ 10:40:09 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this. It was well written and gets the point across well! |
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