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The Sloth
Contributed by
StoneAngel
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Tuesday, 3rd July 2007 @ 01:36:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I sit here
unmoving
high amongst the trees
watching as the world
passes by
I do not know
what I should do
while the world turns
and I sit here
in my tree
I want to venture out
but don't know were to go
I am afraid
because the hounds
are circling my tree
can someone
please help me
have you heard me
whisper
or my cry of anguish?
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StoneAngel
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2007-07-03 13:36:20]
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Re: The Sloth
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 4th July 2007 @ 05:27:31 AM AEST
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Hey, good title. I can relate to this, I really enjoyed the third stanza....
"I am afraid
because the hounds
are circling my tree"
I like those lines. Thanks for sharing.
(starting to look for your writes, now *smiles*)
Peace,
Laura |
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