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State of Mind
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:43:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Broken bridges
Lead nowhere
Memories
Lingering there
Ice covered path
Slippery feet
Motions feeble
Wrong way street
Lost in circle
Spiraling out control
Never evolving
Lonely heart patrol
Specters from shadows
Crying out names
Moments haunting
Old burnt out flames
Time has stopped
For this miserable beast
Mourning what was
Self pity the feast
When will it learn?
Dont look behind
Love lives forward
Its all a state of mind
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2007-07-05 01:43:42]
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Re: State of Mind
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 03:55:16 AM AEST
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Awwww Shari i wish i could do something for you.Heres a big hug for you
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Re: State of Mind
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 04:31:33 AM AEST
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I have walked this path and been in this very same state of mind my dear old friend. You've hit the nail on the head here and done so with grace and eloquence.. I hope you are well. :)
Very well done
Roses
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Re: State of Mind
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:43:45 PM AEST
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Hang tuff, my friend.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: State of Mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:01:59 AM AEST
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Oh Shari, this was truly gripping! It almost felt like a torturous
nightmare; one that tosses you in and out of consciousness
throughout the night's sleep. But that ending is a real and true
and B E A U T I F U L reality that more should live by. [Like
waking from a nightmare ... : ) ]
Excellent write, my friend.
~Breezy
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Re: State of Mind
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:46:31 AM AEST
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From torment there is beauty. Fine poets find it. You have. Excellent write!
wabl
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