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Mad with choices
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Sickened by thoughts
of what I've become.
Drowning in shots
of tequilla and rum.
Now the worm rots
in SuicidalSon.
Madned by voices
trapped in my head.
Leaving no choices
except to be dead.
Silenced in anger
unable to talk.
Signs of danger
no will to walk.
For my remainder
no time to sulk.
Diseased by life
its to consuming.
I grab a knife
the end I'm assuming.
No more life
no more abusing.
This is the end
wich way am I choosing?
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
... [
2003-03-01 16:00:00]
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Re: Mad with choices
(User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 12:46:38 AM AEST
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| this poem was interesting but i would never think about killing myself |
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Re: Mad with choices
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:25:28 PM AEST
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| i love it... |
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Re: Mad with choices
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by SystamaticSuicide on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 02:22:35 PM AEST
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awesome peom....i can relate in so many ways....
*Systematic Suicide* |
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Re: Mad with choices
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:13:26 PM AEST
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I to can relate. I know your nickname is SuicidalSon, but the line with your name doesnt seem to fit. This was a very creative poem however. Like it a lot. Keep on writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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