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distance distraght
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 07:30:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Thunder roars in the distant sky
distraught voices
feeding someone lies
take off the disguise
I read through your eyes
the darkness
the coldness
all consuming
it would take hells fire to even put a chip
in the ice inside
Time will run out
people will need more.. more than you give
In the end of everything
you'll stand outside wishing you could get in
Vampyress jenni
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2007-07-05 07:30:30]
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Re: distance distraght
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 09:43:44 AM AEST
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Wow whats up JENNI you seem down lately .
Hope your ok?
take care
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Re: distance distraght
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 10:01:57 AM AEST
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insightfully strong with vivid images of one known well,
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: distance distraght
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:14:42 PM AEST
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Whew! intence is all i can say. The emotions behind theses words are screaming with poetic fury. A very revealing write. Nicely done.
Ben |
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Re: distance distraght
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by seafire on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 04:09:44 AM AEST
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this is a great poem jenni. good write . i really like this you'll stand outside wishing you could get in . i really like that verse alot.
love your momma |
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