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azure afternoon
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:26:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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a scent wafted across the room, the air lite as a berry
twinkling of windchimes, guitar music plucked merry,
curtains shuttered in the breeze, trees swayed featherlike
through the glass spoke sunlight, as notes did spike,
~*~
a flute drifted along as the forest smiled, sweet sound
gentle piano keys were added, there softly to resound,
to make one gaze up at the sky, harmonious euphony
animals listened and bees paused, whilst making honey,
~*~
a sweeter world it is, furniture made by the gift of trees
life circles, artsy branches permanent canopy marquee,
swift cloud passes overhead, then vivid lasting vermilion
and here sit i, in the midst of natures beautiful pavilion.
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ladyfawn
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2007-07-05 08:26:47]
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Re: azure afternoon
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 08:31:20 AM AEST
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wow a stunning marvelous write.. beautiful imagery in this.. I loved this piece.. reminds me of a story.. lovely absolutely lovely!!
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Re: azure afternoon
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 09:07:17 AM AEST
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A most stunning write my friend, beauty at its finest.
Happy fourth
Michelle |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 09:14:11 AM AEST
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I agree with Michelle and emy here .
This write is amazingly stunning.
Great job
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Re: azure afternoon
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 12:19:48 PM AEST
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Incredibly beautifull write, girlfriend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 01:05:21 PM AEST
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A lucid lesson in the key of beautiful. Simply
music 2 my ears. BRAVO MAESTRO NESSA
LA MUSICA CONTESSA . . .
((((Nessa))))
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 02:33:45 PM AEST
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| A real beauty Nessa, just loved it. |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Dom on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:21:28 PM AEST
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Oh Nessa this is so captivating and beautiful, your descriptions have taken me into a very tranquil mood.
Lovely write,
Dom |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 11:49:32 PM AEST
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Nessa this was breathtaking!! Absolutely!!
I was transported to a forest myself with your beautiful descriptions and
could actually hear the amazing sounds of music that the forest creates,
along with the flute and piano you have interwoven here. This reminds
me a little of those mood CD's where, if you close your eyes, you actually
feel like you are experiencing it in FULL life! wow.
wonderful job. Just a splendid, splendid write!
~Breezy |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Nazmythian on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:03:42 PM AEST
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My personal favorite ... ?
"through the glass spoke sunlight..."
That alone speaks volumes.
Wonderful, Nessa
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Spike on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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Lucky gal - how can you think yourself cloaked in anything but beauty, because it shines through - yours and that rustic Eden you describe (then again, how can any of us think that way, when we are above ground and lucky enough to be living the moment, when we remember to).
ps: loved the Cowley quote, and thanks for your genuine and wonderful comments.
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Re: azure afternoon
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 04:59:47 AM AEST
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This is truly a great nature piece!
The images, the feelings it evokes, what it says....and most especially what it doesn't say!
I am transported! |
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Re: azure afternoon
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by colinb on
Sunday, 6th July 2014 @ 01:28:08 AM AEST
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| beautifuly descriptive |
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