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Strobe Blacklight
Contributed by
sally-heart-jack
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 02:12:56 PM in AEST
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abstract
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Dead wire never connects anything.
Everybody hide !
We're under bright lights
And we're burning our chances to get out of this alive
Keep looking up!
Grab your partner's nearest arm,
drag them with you, alive or dead
They can fix them where we're going
Slipping in the crack in the concrete
To the stream where two dirty oceans meet
I know it's damp and the air is repulsive
Control your stomachs, drunk and convulsive
We'll lift atop yellow-red jealousy
Drift along the tops of the desolate
Create swan-crafted shapes with future rays
Unwrap lava triangles, make them tesselate
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sally-heart-jack
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2007-07-05 14:12:56]
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Re: Strobe Blacklight
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 03:19:16 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking, interesting write.
Huggs,
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Re: Strobe Blacklight
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:04:43 AM AEST
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where have you been??
This was exceptionally deep and very thought stirring.
You are right, of course .. there is always hope, especially
if we stick together.
The metaphor here was as clever as it was interesting.
I look forward to more of you work ... : )
~Breezy |
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Re: Strobe Blacklight
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 08:25:22 AM AEST
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this is fabulous, it is refreshing, vibrant, alive!
love n' hugs nessa
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