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When I Look At You
Contributed by
bruce
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Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 02:26:56 PM in AEST
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When I Look At You
When I look at you
words could not convey
The feelings that I get
that are there everyday
You are a very special lady
and I the luckiest of men
To have you come into my life
and to be loved and love once again
In ones life, along with good health
love plays a major part
You give your love unconditionally
loving with your heart
When I look at you
you are such a heavenly delight
You turn my darkest days
by making everything seem alright
You surely are a wonder
more than words can say
And I thank GOD every moment
for sending you my way
Copyright ©
bruce
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2007-07-05 14:26:56]
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Re: When I Look At You
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 03:33:56 PM AEST
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Another beautifull write that I'm sure that will be cherished.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Mila on
Thursday, 5th July 2007 @ 06:51:41 PM AEST
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| Very Nice!!! |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 12:06:08 AM AEST
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Oh Bruce, another beautifully romantic and soft write.
How exquisite, not only in word, but in sentiment. There is a
delicate feel to this that just induces the most heart-stirring
sighs ...
Beautiful write, my friend.
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Re: When I Look At You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:35:05 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful write.. so full of dedication and pasion for the one you love.. well said..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:52:45 AM AEST
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Simple words. Beautiful rhythm....all describing such a wonderful and complex thing.....LOVE. Wonderfully penned. Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 08:27:23 AM AEST
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a love that one and all dream of,
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: When I Look At You
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by shelby on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 03:11:30 AM AEST
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I am happy to know my friend that a special gal is filling your life with love. YOu are right aside from good health we need love and this is a beautiful and most romantic fact of this.
Michelle |
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Re: When I Look At You
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by funnyface09 on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 12:59:28 PM AEST
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great write..
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