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Butterfly Eclipse
Contributed by
wizard
on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:43:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Chasing dreams of tales untold
And butterflies against the wind,
Shattered hopes run uncontrolled;
Abruptly narrowed thoughts rescind.
Empty meadows within a heart
With love aflutter in the breeze
Elusively it plays its part;
As chase ensues, it quickly flees.
Upon a leaf of violet swirl
Waits the gentle blushing rogue,
Its flutter causing love to whirl;
This sudden chase; the latest vogue.
So many follow in pursuit;
With others simply dreaming of
A day to catch, and soon recruit
This butterfly of golden love.
Evasive in its subtle flight
Unmindful of the chasing fools,
Lost within its own delight
It sets its own unwieldy rules.
Stretched across the whispering sky,
Riding winds of broken dreams
Through days destined to go awry...
Yet a glimmer of hope forever gleams.
Copyright ©
wizard
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2007-07-06 13:43:26]
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 01:53:25 PM AEST
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beautiful in style, grace and flow, an exquisite poem, i loved every breath of it...
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:36:59 PM AEST
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Well we miss you and your poetry here in ypdc .You wrote this in a style of its own so refreshing and beautiful .
Chasing dreams of tales untold
And butterflies against the wind,
Shattered hopes run uncontrolled;
Abruptly narrowed thoughts rescind.
Empty meadows within a heart
With love aflutter in the breeze…
Elusively it plays its part;
As chase ensues, it quickly flees.
i just love those lines
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by Ineedanap on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 03:39:21 PM AEST
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Wow...amazing imagery...i could literally see it...
Beautiful
~Brookie Cookie |
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by troubled on
Friday, 6th July 2007 @ 04:41:53 PM AEST
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| very well written. |
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 02:56:03 AM AEST
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a very deep sad write.. very heartfelt and very well worded and expressed.. good job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 10:51:06 AM AEST
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bro,
I was completely swept-up and blown away by this..
and distinctly, to an even greater extent,
by the final stanza - that both in composition and
emotion, left me on the brink of tears.. really-
amazing.. prodigal even~
one of your best!
B
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Re: Butterfly Eclipse
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 05:07:31 AM AEST
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I was a little caught up in all the beauty that I saw in this write. Lovely, lovely read.
Peace,
Laura |
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