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Love Poem
Contributed by
Lucy
on
Saturday, 7th July 2007 @ 11:55:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Life is like a box of chocolates,
They all, so wisely, seem to say.
But a ribboned box of Belgiums fame
Holds more than fancied, foil-wrapped lies.
Take this, a strawberry cream, a dream.
A sweet, soft declaration of trust and lust.
A promise so beautiful, yet just as strong
As the fleeting brush, shy touch of a
Cloud.
Or this, a hazelnut whirl, a twirl
In lovers arms, a passionate glance, enraptured trance.
When it comes to the crunch, the fire is there,
But the honesty, interest?
Beware.
Toffee surprise? Dry your eyes, all lies.
The vows are broken, words were spoken
Loud, in your ears. They ring and wrench,
Hard to chew, so longing, tough, just cry.
Why?
Maybe the chocolate square, how dare
They show their happy glow, it hit below
The belt. You wish. Anything to break the mould
Of green eyed flares, you must ensnare their
Hopes.
Or Turkish Delight, not right, its fright.
So scared theyll up and leave, you believe,
Theyre just too good, theyll slip right through
Your grasping fingers like jelly, too bright and free to
Stay.
So yes, lifes like a box of this:
Its ancient, crucial, centuries old,
That clichd gift, 8.99
Means more than poem, verse or line.
Its love.
Copyright ©
Lucy
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2007-07-07 23:55:44]
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Re: Love Poem
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 03:05:32 AM AEST
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Wow. ...another enjoyable read. I quite liked the bit of sarcasm here. Love poem *smiles*...what an appropriate title. Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
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Re: Love Poem
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 04:56:00 AM AEST
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a very enjoyable simply lovely write here.. I like the flow and the love is well expressed good job
vampyress Jenni |
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