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Just One More Shot
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Sunday, 8th July 2007 @ 03:51:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Just one more shot and Ill be out
No more pain no more thoughts
Drink it down swallow it hard
The sweet poison burns my throat
I cant stand the room is spinning
But Im content just where Im sitting
Youre not there no thoughts of you at all
For the first time in a while I feel good
Just one more shot and Ill be out
No more pain no more thoughts
Drink it down swallow it hard
It slithers so easily down my throat
I cant see everything is blurry
But Im content theres nothing to see
Ill stay here all night until the sun rises
Ill leave when reality settles back in
Just one more shot and Ill be out
No more pain no more thoughts
Drink it down swallow it hard
I cant even taste it sliding down my throat
The morning sun shines my head is pounding
Slowly I rise my legs are feel weak
I guess I drank a little to much
But all I wanted was just to be numb
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2007-07-08 15:51:07]
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Re: Just One More Shot
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by sona on
Monday, 9th July 2007 @ 07:15:11 AM AEST
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I say you were absolutely write in saying the poem is not great.It is not great it is WONDERFUL
really enjoyed it
BRAVO!!!
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Re: Just One More Shot
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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wow this gives the feeling of trying to block pain out with drinking.. never good but its well expressed.. this is a very good poem with a nice flow of words.. good job
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Re: Just One More Shot
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 05:00:12 AM AEST
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| Been there far too often ha... You really evoked the exact feeling of it, nicely done : ) |
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