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Keep Me
Contributed by
jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:29:36 AM in AEST
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I greet you with this sad face
Fast paced days
At last, peace in the shade
The garden dirt-
Of which life is essentially made
Reach for me
Please take me away
Sitting close
Distanced space
Resistance placed
Pretty pose
Pull you closer
Fingers gentle on your face
Hear me whisper
Watch me taste
Your skin
Within
My mouth
I am yours
Make me stay
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
... [
2007-07-11 03:29:36]
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Re: Keep Me
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by Ju1cy on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 07:36:48 AM AEST
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| Beautifuly written xx |
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Re: Keep Me
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 11:30:15 AM AEST
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Hot, hot, hot.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Keep Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 03:08:07 PM AEST
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Damn that was sweet....I'd keep ya....*smiles*. Beautifully penned.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Keep Me
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by brew on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 10:42:44 PM AEST
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becoming entwined with another soul and making it begin.......what a write, ..beautiful.
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Re: Keep Me
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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jyss..
once again, a great post.
you always seem to say so much
with so little.. and with haunting clarity;
relative to my own experiences of course..lol
B
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Re: Keep Me
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by endlesspath on
Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 12:44:03 AM AEST
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i would keep you. i wished and hope i would find a one who would throw words out to me like that . who wouldnt want to keep you if they knew it was worth all you just wrote. excellent write
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Re: Keep Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 01:17:52 PM AEST
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I like how even though this poem is sad in nature:
The garden dirt-
Of which life is essentially made
Reach for me
Please take me away
It reaches out to someone, asking to be helped, to be saved from a hopeless existence. Which shows a true strength of character.
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