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Beauty
Contributed by
brokenheartsbleed
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Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:39:27 AM in AEST
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Its in the smile
Of a young mans face
Knowing that his world changed
Its in the dream
Of a young girls heart
To understand this life and who we are
Its the simple things
From day to day
Theres so much beauty its hard to look away
Its in the night sky
So distant and far away
Its in the feeling knowing
That we all go home someday
Its in a struggle
To find our way
Its the hope we find
At the end of the day
Its the simple things
From day to day
Theres so much beauty its hard to look away
You would cry if you saw it
Your knees would hit the ground
The answers to your prayers
Would then be found
Theres so much beauty its hard to look away
Theres so much beauty its hard to look away
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2007-07-12 01:39:27]
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Re: Beauty
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:44:34 AM AEST
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such a well written poem.. full of truth and conviction.. marvelous
rock on
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Re: Beauty
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by joydeep_nath on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 01:57:41 AM AEST
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| cool..nicely done...its so +ve.... |
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Re: Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 12:12:54 AM AEST
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I'm with Jenni .. there is much truth and conviction in this.
I love it! The soft rhyme is so subtle, it's hardly there, making
it so much more beautiful, methinks. I love the unique
writing style to this, and the message .. whoa! If only there
were more who truly lived this truth. :)
Great post!
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Re: Beauty
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by sojourner on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:20:35 PM AEST
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There is beauty in your poetry,keep writing
and through the beauty in your poetry, your broken heart in time will mend.
amort(sojourner) |
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Re: Beauty
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by sojourner on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:22:15 PM AEST
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| There is beauty in your poetry,keep writing
and through the beauty in your poetry, your broken heart in time will mend.
amort(sojourner) |
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