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Dang, Damn, Slam
Contributed by
needledancing
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Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 11:51:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Dang, damn, slam, everything I am ,if I'm not the friend you wished for me to be,
Dang, damn, slam if you see me as I am, I can solve your problems and your mystery.
For life has circles come to bloom ,
I've taken time,Reserved the room.
To bring you through the pain.
Dang, damn, slam you can take me as I am, I quess I care to much.
Yet. Dang, damn, slam I've travelled through your soul and I feel it in the touch.
Your heart riped out and torn to pain, I have to ask you once again,
If dang, damn and slam can ease your pain?
It's hard to trust a soul, that is dang, damn and slammed.
But I beg for all your trust in just this minute.
As a heart can be infused so much with a slow and gentle thoughtful touch,
to change every beat and thought within it.
If you be dang, damn, slam then you are but what you am.
I praise the universe and all that's in it.
Copyright ©
needledancing
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2007-07-13 11:51:30]
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 12:30:26 PM AEST
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Good for you! We'll love 'em all 'til some o' 'dat lovin' seeps in the cracks!!!Dang, Damn, Slam dunk, I Love This!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by shelby on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:00:30 PM AEST
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this is awesome, love the dang damn slam and the pic lovely write
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:16:56 PM AEST
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Wonderfully written, compassion and understanding that we can give one another can help overcome the pain we feel. May your heart continue to be filled with peace and joy.
sadaddy
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by Bruce on
Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 02:38:47 PM AEST
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| Lovely write |
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 06:14:51 AM AEST
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| Loved the words and the picture Dang, damn, slam think im going to start saying that lol xxx |
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:57:03 AM AEST
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I read both this and questions there intence and fulled with a bit of stored up reserveations and passion, my friend, nicely expressed boldy revealed, and your heart and sould are showing again.
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Re: Dang, Damn, Slam
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 03:18:24 AM AEST
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The dang damn slam puts a rhythm to this wonderful piece that us performing poets just love! And I love it! Bein' a cowboy poet who uses cacographic language for emphasis I really loved the line, "If you be dang, damn, slam then you are but what you am." Very nice work.
wabl
KenMoore
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